Edit Check In

Editing check in time!  Here's an incomplete list of some of the goofy things I've written on the print out of my first draft. 

• "fiancé" is French.  Is there a masculine and feminine version? Does it matter?
• Is there a way to make it clear that "fiancé" is pronounced with an amazing Texan accent?
• Then I have written "More accents!"  By which I mean embracing the spirit rather than writing things phonetically.  Not that there's anything wrong with that, but that's it's own blog post.
  
• Find the origin of "the jig is up."  It sounds like something you don't realize is racist.
• How do you bake fruit pie from scratch?
• hands on research is important
• also chicken with mushrooms in cheese sauce?  Is that a thing?
• there's a word for cheese sauce.  Find it.
• Research muscles 
• suck it up and just don't look at the gross pictures.
• Research knots
• and braiding
• in the margin is written "friendship bracelets made by sailors."

 Stay tuned for answers to obvious questions and more than you ever wanted to know about pie!